2016年4月21日雅思写作考题与解析
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 #最新考情# 4.21雅思写作考题与解析 

小作文,静态表格。

大作文:环境话题,消费品生产的增加导致环境破坏,分析原因和办法。The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage tothe natural environment. What are the causes and what can be done to solve thisproblem?(题目来自考生回忆)

 题目解析:

这个题目的原因可以写:1.为了满足人们对于消费品不断增加的需求(meet people's increasing demand for consumer goods),工厂普遍使用机器生产(wide use of machines)。生产需要消耗大量的能源和资源(consume large quantities of fuels and resources),产生污染物和排放(generate pollutants and emissions)。还有些企业为了追求经济利益(pursue economic benefits),会过度开采自然资源(exploitnatural resources),甚至采取某些违法行为(commit illegal activities),比如砍伐森林和盗猎(deforestationpoaching

解决办法可以写:1. 改变生活方式,过节俭的生活(lead economical lifestyles2. 开发新能源(develop cleaner fuels),取代化石燃料(replace fossil fuels),改造生产工艺(update the process of production),引进先进设备(introduceadvanced equipment),废品回收(recycle waste products3. 政府制定政策法规(make policies and enforce laws),惩罚破坏环境的行为(punish anybehaviour that damage the environment)。

【以上词汇表达全部来自我们的环境话题词汇表预测话题素材

环境话题一直被列为近期的高危预警话题。在老徐的“写作技巧素材班”第1个和第3个题目都是讲的环境话题。以下节选自技巧班的第1条和第2条素材。

1)不可否认,快速的经济发展和科技进步对环境造成了严重的破坏。现代制造业生产了大量的商品,使得我们的生活更加舒适和方便,然后它也增加了能源和资源的消耗。此外,由于不断改善的生活水平,越来越多的人购买私家车,汽车排放的尾气导致了城市的空气污染。人们现在享受着更好的物质生活,但是他们也扔掉大量的废品垃圾,这些都是很难处理的。

1 There isno denying that the rapid economic growth andtechnologicaladvance have caused serious damage to the environment. The modern manufacturingindustry produces large quantities of goods, making our lives more comfortableand convenient, while it increases the consumption of energy and resources.Besides, due to the improved living standard, more andmore people buy private cars and the exhaust fumes emitted by carslead to air pollution in the city. People enjoy bettermaterial lifenow, but they throw away a huge number of waste products, which arehard to deal with.    

 (2)虽然我们的环境正在恶化,但是我不同意环境问题是不能避免的。恰好相反,我们可以做很多事情去解决这些问题。例如,在很多国家,研究开发新能源已经被提上了日程。我们可以期待这些新型的能源将会逐步地取代化石燃料。回收技术也需要进行完善和推广,这样一来,废品可以被重复利用,把它们对于环境的影响降到最小。此外,任何破坏环境的行为都应该受到严厉的惩罚,包括排放污水、盗猎、砍伐森林等等。

2Despite thefact that our environment is deteriorating, I do notagree that environmental problems cannot be avoided. Instead, there is muchthat we can do to solve these problems. For instance, the research anddevelopment of cleaner fuels such assolar and nuclear energy havebeen put on the agenda in manycountries. We can expect these new forms of energy to replace fossil fuels step bystep. Recycling technology also needs to be improved andpromoted, so the waste products could be reused and their harmful effects onthe environment would be minimized. Moreover,any behavior that damages the environment should be strictly punished,including discharging waste water, poachingdeforestation, etc. 

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